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Review:GrangerDanger76 says:
Hello! Back again!

So this was another lovely chapter! I am so happy to see you have changed your quotation method, and you have developed solid footing in fanfiction. I found a few typos, so if you just give it a quick read through I am sure you will find them.

However there is one thing that is bothering me. Being that these characters are British, it is highly unlikely for any of them to speak Spanish. I am assuming you speak it, and then are trying to incorporate that, which is great, but perhaps you could choose another language, such as French, or even Latin, since much of the wizarding spells are Latin based. You could even stretch it as far as having any European-based languages, would be much more probable then Spanish, even though Spain is Europe. That is just my suggestion, though.

Other then that, you are doing great! Just a reminder, do not give away any personal information (ie, last names, address,) for that is both against site rules and not very safe! I hope your sister creates an account, and starts her own fanfiction journey! :)

Camille
GrangerDanger76

Author's Response: ha ha ha. Rose Williams is not my real name nor my sister's I don't really like the name my parents gave us coz you can't shorten it so i decided to call us Rosaline and Josephine Williams. It's just our penames.
Anyways, I know what you mean about spanish but I just thought it would be interesting because Antonio Banderas, Enrique Iglesias and manny other REALLY hot guys come form Spain and I thought "Why not incluse a charming/playboy spanish guy?"
I don't speak french, though I do know a bit of Latin though.
And i think Josephine will post her story soon too.
And thanks for the suggestions I really love them!
Love
R.W

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