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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello Gabbie!
I loved this chapter! The entire beginning section had me cringing, and poor Albus just kept feeling worse and worse! I rely felt bad for the three of them during their entire lecture from Neville and Blaise.
I thought the part where Scorpy and Lav said that they liked having each other and Albus as friends was really sweet! I think the three of them make really good friends, because they all have such different personalities, but can also get along really well, even if they do bicker sometimes :) And I felt so bad for Scorp when he said that he liked Albus and Lav because they didn't think he was going to die! He is one of my favorite characters, because of how you write him, and the fact that he had this little moment of vulnerability, when he usually tries to act so tough, really made my heart go out to him!
And their punishment really does sound awful! No quidditch for two more years! That would be terrible! And have to stay over the holidays and help Filch... Yuck! I would hate that! And poor Albus, not getting to see all of his cousins, and missing his parents! I think that would be the worst part for me! And the last part of their punishment really did it. What are they going to do now that their plan is ruined?
Rose and Sue were not happy with them! Personally, I would be scared if they had it out for me like that! At least Lav was able to stop anything really bad from happening! I feel like she's always coming to save the day! Haha. And the end of the chapter with Peeves has me a bit worried... I wonder what happened with Roxie! It seems like everything that could go wrong for the Misfits has, and I'm already cringing a little bit thinking about what else could got wrong!
This chapter was amazing, and I loved all the emotions I felt from it! THE FEELS. I can't wait to find out what happens next, and hopefully we'll see Ben soon! Heeheehee. 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: HellO!

Wow, thanks for being the first person to come and attack this. I just saw that it was validated and was surprised that alot of people had actually read it! :D
Oh, that scene with the children getting their punishment was so hard to write. I wasn't sure how far I wanted to go with it and poor Albus was just getting so upset. D':
I thought adding in a bit more companionship/love between the Misfits was really important and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. It was a sweet moment to write! :3
And that bit with Scorpy made me sort of sad but there are moments of real vulnerability with him that I love exploring. He has it harder than anyone realizes.
And he's very fun to write, I enjoy his lines and his character very much, the complicated kids are always the most fun. Sorry, Albus! ;)
Yep, I had to think of something awful for each of them adn I think it worked out all right! I mean, no quidditch, spending the holidays with FILCH?! Uhm, no! Hhaha. And they won't be able to see their families and that hurt Albus the most because he's really close to his family. :(
You'll have to wait and see what they do to solve their latest problem with Halloween. :D
HAHAHA. Yeah, I'd hate it if Sue and Rose were after ME like that too! Scary stuff and Lav is a doll, isn't she? She's like a super hero! Hahahah.
And she has amazing aim.
Hahaha. You'll see what happened with Roxie, so no worries! :3
Peeves may or may not have been lying. Hahhaha.
The next chapter is halfway done! Whoo! And A Force of Blaise is nearly done as well too! ;)
You'll see Ben very soon. He misses you very much.
Much love and thanks so much! :D
Gabbie


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