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Review:teh tarik says:
Hello there! I've been meaning to read this story since I saw you post the link on the forums...but never really had the time :) First, I'm so so glad that you liked my suggestion for the title!

Wow, your characterisations are excellent in this story! Luna is written so beautifully, and she's so in-character. She has so much courage and innocence such a strong sense of morality...and then there's her trademark weirdness, her quirkiness, and I lovelove how you've ended the story on this quirky, slightly humorous note about wrackspurts.

It's a dark story, but Luna really shines through. And I love that little moment with Ollivander.

And Bellatrix is so chillingly portrayed here. I think you've pretty much pinned her down perfectly - her cruelty and everything.

I think this is a fantastic story, exploring Luna's war experiences and emotional state. I've enjoyed reading this! Great work :)

-teh

Author's Response: Hello! :D Thank you again for the wonderful title! :D

Oh my, I'm glad you think my characterisations are excellent! They're very hard characters to write! :D

I feel like Ollivander and Luna would have been really close after their time in the cellar. And I think it would have started on good terms straight away. :)

Bellatrix was SO hard to write. I kept thinking, "Is she psycho enough? Is she too pyscho?" :p I'm glad you think I've written her well, it really means a lot! :D

Thank you for the lovely review and thank you again for the title! :D

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