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Review:adluvshp says:
Hi Summer! Here's Aditi dropping by to random review you ;)

Ooh I loved this! I chose this story because I hardly read any Molly/Arthur's, and I was quite intrigued by the summary. This is a very different aspect of their relationship that you have explored, and its great. We get to see the insecurities and doubt that Molly went through in the initial stages of her relation with Arthur, which is definitely something new, since most stories I've come across don't pick such moments.

I liked how you maintained a kind of suspense throughout to know what she was so worried about, and all. It was good. The little "back then" descriptions also added a nice touch to the story. I do wish though that you had ended this with Arthur's reaction rather than the news though, but anyways, this made for a nice read!



Author's Response: Molly and Arthur are a couple that's always intrigued me throughout this and this is the element of how young they were when they actually had Bill!

Molly's insecurities are always there so I wanted to show them in this. I'm glad you liked the suspense. Arthur's reaction is something I leave to the imagination but I think everyone knows he is over the moon (or he would be in my eyes anyway!)

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