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Review:deceptive_serenade says:
Oooh, look at me, reviewing as I read. YAAAY!

I just wished she didn't look so miserable playing the game she loved.

^ you just hit home there...

Aww, it's Falcon Cat!! :D Yes, Avery. Thank you. Finally, James has turned the cat into a teacup. Goodness, it only took him forty-seven chapters.

I hope they play laser tag. It'd be awesome. Everyone should gang up on James and he'd get cornered and everybody would make him run laps and Avery would snog him at the end, when the torture is over. Hehe.


... wait, what just happened? Oh, Rose. You just gained so much respect. Wow. If it was me and I didn't like the guy, I never would've done it... actually, I probably would have. I'd take pity on him. ;D *speaking from my years of experience COUGH*

Oh, sexy Albus. Mmm.

LOL TRAP HER IN A SHOWER. That doesn't sound familiar at all, huh? Oh, James. You're so in love.

... oh god. Rose. You just lost my respect... but that was freaking hilarious, hahahahaha XD

I can sort of relate to James. I mean, imagine if everything I learned about music - everything I worked for, all the scales and performances and recordings and bleeding fingers and sore throats and tears and ripped up songs and words - and it was all gone. I don't know what I'd do with myself, honestly.





That scene was incredible. I couldn't even stop to review.




Just wow.

And you know what? It's making me really sad, but I understand. I really do. This, especially:

She turned, looking at me at last. "We were both idiots," she said quietly, her green eyes on my face. "But that's what bloody happens when people don't talk about things or when they hide things or when some stupid girl's stupid father gets in the way." She leaned her body toward me. I didn't move. "I'm not giving up on you. Every day I think about you. I think about what you did to me. How I broke your heart. James, I can't handle it anymore. I want us again."


Never before had I heard Avery be so vulnerable. She didn't put down her walls on a regular basis. Not like this.

That was incredible. I'm actually speechless. At both of them. They stopped being so stubborn and now they're finally thinking clearly. Avery is acknowledging the fact that a person can really depend on someone else and what in their relationship went wrong. James is acknowledging the fact that they're not ready to be a couple again - as painful as that truth is.

But I'm still hoping they're going to work it out so that they are ready for a relationship. Really. Because I don't think they could be with anyone else. They're perfect for each other.

"I don't want to be just friends. I'm going to fight for you."

Come on, Avery. It's your turn to fight.

Beautiful chapter. ♥

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

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