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Review:deceptive_serenade says:



I loved this chapter. It made me super sad and close to tears but I absolutely loved it. I was so wrong to dread it. It was amazing. AMAZING, I TELL YOU!

Avery... you know what I call her (and James). I'm not sure why she's pretending like she doesn't care - maybe it's a coping method? I mean, Emily and Al do the same thing. But maybe she was just too guilty or something, because she definitely cares (hence the tears in her eyes :P)... and god, this isn't doing much for their friendship and always being there for each other.

Albus: he's (fine) second hottest to James. And so adorable. It was so cute how proud James was of his little brother. Heck, I bet everyone was proud. I love how he turned it around on Paloma for their mess, I thought that was hilarious.

Mr. Flynn, you have no heart. I hate you. I'm gonna call my dad tonight and tell him that I love him.

The last scene, as you've already heard, is probably my favourite in some weird and twisted sort of way. Don't get me wrong - that was one of the most heartbreaking scenes I've read on here - but it was so... wow. That's not an adjective, but that's how I'm describing it. You just led up to it so well and how James' dreams just went down the toilet and then how Avery was there /again/, especially when he needed her but she wasn't there for /him/. I'm not even sure why she was there. Was she going to tell him something? Either way... wow. Beautifully heartbreaking. That's all I can say.

I feel so bad for James, and a little for Avery now that she knows what actually happened. Oh, hero's complex. Thanks for screwing us over, huh? :P

James, stop ending up in the hospital wing.

Anyway, amazing chapter ♥ loved it so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

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