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Review:deceptive_serenade says:
JAMES IS SAD. I AM SAD FOR HIM. WE SHOULD GET MARRIED.
It's inevitable, see? ;)

*sniff sniff* I never thought I'd be so sad. Especially since I saw it coming, but it was still so... *sniiifff* YES JAVERY WILL SURVIVE I NEED IT TO SURVIVE TO LIVE!!! WHAT KIND OF QUESTION IS THAT?!?!

My heart broke with that line: "I had to move past Avery Flynn." I was like... mentally screaming at my computer. NO. NO. NOOO. I REFUSE.

Well, my refusing doesn't really matter. But whatever.

Despite it being so sad, I really loved this chapter. Like you mentioned before, it was the first time James felt so much emotion -- at least, from what we've seen. And one part hit me really hard:

I continued to stare at her pained face. It was me. I had done this to her. The only girl I ever cared for and she was sobbing on the side of the Quidditch pitch. The girl who rarely cried, who was stronger emotionally (and sometimes physically) than me. And I broke her. This was me. And it was too hard for her to put up with my bullshit and she had to get out.

And it might have been because I use the term "breaking" in YCMM, and it's really close to me. ♥

I really hope they become friends again, if not together. I don't think I could stand no interaction between the two of them.

Update soon. AND QUIT MAKING ME CRYYY.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

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