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Review:patronus_charm says:
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I decided to come and read your work, as youíve read some of mine, I thought it was time I repaid the favour!

I loved your description it was excellent you created a very vivid scene for me, which I love as I think itís so important in a story to exactly know what the scene looks like! I also like how you described the many meaning of the colour green, I never really thought about it before, so it was thought provoking:)

Even though I knew it was about Cedric, it took me a while to realise where it was taking place, because I thought at first they were already in the grave yard, it was only when you mentioned the branches grabbing him that he was still in the maze.

It was interesting seeing the maze scene in another personís head as Iím so used to it taking place in Harryís it was nice to have another perspective. It was nice to see that he was sticking by his Hufflpuff morals of being fair, even though he wanted to bring his house honour, as normally people would just want to bring themselves honour, and not really caring who else gets it.

I rather like Cho/Cedric stories as theyíre rather unexplored, so it was nice to see that she was in his thoughts when he imagined winning the cup, as it showed how much they cared for one another and it helped explain, why she was so traumatised after his death.

I didnít realise that Cedric viewed himself as being competition with Harry as like he said, I always thought he was the good guy, who didnít mind too much about winning. I thought the bit about including the rivalry over Cho was good, as I never thought anyone noticed that Harry liked her, other than Hermione, but that does make sense.

Overall I thought this was a really interesting story, and Iím glad I read it, as it was nice to see Cedric with more depth! Kiana

Author's Response: Hello!

Sorry for the delay in replying! Thank you so much for stopping by.

I didn't actually mean it to be so thought provoking but it's not a bad thing I guess. I really tried to get the description right in this so I'm glad it worked!

I really wanted Cedric to be proud of his house and for that to show through. I also felt Cho would be in his thoughts as well as his family. I wasn't sure about just Hermione knowing, I felt Harry made it a bit obvious at times and he did ask her to the ball. Hopefully it works anyway.

Thanks for the lovely review!

Lauren


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