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Review:ChaosWednesday says:
hey there! It's Whiskey from the formus for the review swap! I know I took for ever to get to it, but after I posted on the formus I realized I had less time than I thought :P

Anyways, interesting idea!Very unusual style. I like how impassive the narrator seems to be, even as she is describing how her father is tying her up.

I must say, though, I did notice some typos. It's not much, but worth looking over. Also, you seem to leave out words a lot, especially in the beginning, like here: "I didnít homework". Also, this sentence seems quite awkward and I think it could be rephrased in a more simple way: "My father's interest showed in me only after my display in magic."

All in all, interesting! I liked the isolated villiage setting, would have loved to read more about it. You really do like your arranged marriage strories, huh? ;)

cheers, and sorry for taking so long to swap!

Author's Response: Hey! thanks for doing this!

Im glad you like the narrator! I wanted her to be a bit different and I guess as a cold person, she is very different.

Thanks for pointing that out! I didn't actually notice it when I read it haha :P

LOL yah I guess :P I always try to find stories like that to read and when I dont find them... I start writing them on my own lol =)

Thanks so much!

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