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Review:harrietm says:
I've been reading this story recently and I'm really enjoying it :) I love the changing viewpoints and all the characters have me somewhat emotionally attached haha
I liked this chapter, it was cute the way Albus knew what Scorpius was going to say. And Charlotte was also pretty cute in her way.
The only thing was the end of the chapter could've maybe been more dramatic if you ended with Leo's more worried pov, a cliffhanger of sorts just to really make people excited for the chapter. Or even just ended with the quote "I need new friends", just to make it cleaner/sharper? Idk.
That said, I'm excited anyway for Ellie's return and more of James :D
Loving it overall, update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback! I will definitely take your advice. I'm glad you like my character development :) The next chapter should be validated later tonight or tomorrow morning.

Thanks again,
soapman333


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