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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
No, Hermione! Oh, Ron! He knows she's not right, he needs to help her! And then she uses an Unforgivable on Susan; this book is just evil, I hate it. But the spells inside, like the dragon, is so creative and complex and... You've done a brilliant job with this.

I imagine the disillusioned figure in the study was Harry, in which case Draco really should have known from HBP. Age has messed with his head. :P I loved how Scorpius stood up to Draco, enough to say that he was a part of Harry's family. It was so small and simple, saying that you're a part of your wife's family, but when speaking to a Malfoy about a Potter - it's, like, huge. I love that part of this chapter.

I really hope they find Rose and Octavia soon. :)

Amazing chapter.

Sam.

Author's Response: It definitely isn't fun to see Hermione like this. She's making bad choices left and right, compounding darkness with darkness. I'm glad you think it works. All throughout writing it, I was concerned about how it would seem to the reader.

The disillusioned figure is... well, it's an interested party. ;) You'll have to wait and see who it was. Scorpius really has no issues with standing up to his father, but sometimes his resolve wavers. He really needs Rose in his life.

Thanks so much for all of your lovely reviews!


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