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Review:patronus_charm says:

I know Iím going to regret reading this, because whenever I do read a story where the narrator is unknown I get annoyed as I donít know who it is! But I decided to take the risk anyway!

I liked how you left us little clues, such as the colour of her hair, her house, and that her boyfriend was influential, as it was enough for us to have a vague idea as to who it was, but not too much for it to be given away completely.

Even though it was rather short I found it effective as it kept you guessing, and for the purpose of this story, if it went on for any longer, it perhaps would have become a little boring!

A good one-shot in my opinion and Iím going to guess Pansy Parkinson due to her hate for Hermione, and the boy probably is Draco. Please tell me if Iím right or not!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Haha I hope I didn't make you too annoyed!

I am glad that you liked the concept of the "clues", and that you found it short but effective. Its a relief to hear that it wasn't boring as it is!

Thank you so much for your review, and yes it is Pansy Parkinson and Draco Malfoy. It wasn't too hard to guess xP

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