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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello again :)

Another really good chapter! I'm really enjoying where you're taking this story and the build up of Rose and Connors relationship. You hinted she was still thinking of Malfoy in this too though, at the end. I'm rooting for Connor all the way!

Aww, Teddy and Vic are cute and I really hope you write a chapter about their wedding as that will be great to read!

Go Molly, getting Rose to fetch Connor! There was one bit though - you mentioned something about a brother? I got really confused, I wasn't sure if I missed something or whether it was a typo: 'their brother who I have no clue what his name is'. Maybe you can clear that up for me!

I loved Ron's reaction to Rose dancing with Connor! I would have loved to have got some more out of her dancing with both Connor and Scorpius. Maybe a moment of awkwardness? Some more conversation between them? Again I don't think you need too much, but that would be my CC for you :)

A good chapter though!

Well done,
Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hello again :)

Yes there is a chapter for their wedding, chapter 8 in fact :D

Yes Connor and Nikola have a younger brother, he was first mentioned in chapter 1 and his name is Ronan :D

Thanks again for reviewing and I'm glad you like it :)

Thanks for the CC!!!

-Potterfan310
Soph x


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