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Review:AlexFan says:
Hello, I'm here for the review battle! I really loved the amount of description that you put in the chapter and besides the one grammar error I didn't see much wrong.

I think you did a great job on Draco's thoughts. The more I read on the more I realised that this sounded like Draco Malfoy. The thoughts made sense, the thoughts were the thoughts of a boy who had grown up like Draco Malfoy.

I don't think Ron would've gone on with blonde bimbos after he became famous. I agree that he would've loved the limelight and basked in it and heck, used it to get free stuff but I highly doubt that he would've used it to pick up girls.

Judging from the books he was crazy about Hermione and they got together before the war was even over.

Anyway, this was a really good chapter!

Author's Response: Hello! It's nice to see you again!

I'm glad that you liked all the description, as I was little worried it was too much, and the reader would get bored due to no action, so I'm glad that wasn't the case! I'll go back and weed out that grammar error! Only having one is a record for me!

I'm so glad that Draco's thoughts worked well, as I'm writing it from a girls mind so it's a lot harder, and especially as the characters Draco, as he's so complex and we never know what he's thinking!

Yes I did think it was a tad too far myself about Ron and the bimbos, but I guess as it's from Draco's perspective, his always going to exagarate things when it comes to poor old Ron!

Thank you for the great review!

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