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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Whoa, talk about a dark chapter! And I thought some of the chapters with Gamp's insanity or the chapter where Ron threatened to drop the officer he took from the Burrow was dark. But then you bring in Hermione and the book and getting her legs to work again and all the anger she had to feel and yeah... Whoa.

I'd be rather scared if Hermione embraced the darkness, and for for so long. But I'm strangely fascinated to see Dark!Hermione... She'll have Ron to bring her back. ;)

Ooh, Malfoy might have answers to Rose and Octavia's whereabouts. Good that he can help, given that they're his family, too. I can't wait to read what he has to say.

I loved this chapter!


Author's Response: The story will be on a decidedly darker trajectory for the next 6 or 7 chapters. This is a war story, and there's a lot of darkness in war. Parts of it weren't much fun to write, I'll admit.

Hermione does embrace the darkness, to an extent, but "Good Hermione" is always in there somewhere. Hopefully it will be enough to keep her from going over the edge.

Draco definitely has some things he can call on. And he's not kidding. He will do absolutely whatever it takes to get Octavia back.

I am so impressed with how quickly you're moving through this. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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