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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there! It's Courtney, here for your requested review:)

First of all, I want to say that I think this is an awesome idea for a new, original story! I absolutely love everything and anything to do with Oliver Wood, whether that be angst, humour, Quidditch, drunkenness or a combination of the above. And you have certainly ticked some of these boxes!

From what I've seen this chapter, the dynamics and chemistry of the players of Puddlemere United are very interesting. I've never read about a Quidditch team that is quite so...erm, unorganized, and I feel a little sorry for Oliver, after his success with the Hogwarts Gryffindor team. However I can tell that there are going to be some very funny moments between the team members, and I like the fact that you are already beginning to give each and every character their own individual personality.

I think that Pippa is my favourite character so far. She seems very quirky and a little spunky which I absolutely love. I also loved her line: '“I can’t find my gum shield,” she muffled from in under the bench' because it was just so randomly perfect! And Oliver's characterization is great. I can totally see some of that slightly maniacal Quidditch captain from his school days, especially when he's watching his team play and is getting quite frantic. Very funny!

I love the random little humorous bits you have scattered throughout this chapter that make it very enjoyable to read. I think my personal favourite line was: '“That was not a firewhiskey,” I coughed, wiping the back of my mouth with my hand.

“It was. . . . . mostly” she conceded.'

A very nice chapter-I think this is going to turn out to be an absolutely awesome story!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Awh! Thank you so much for such a nice review :D

Yes, Pippa might just be my favourite as well! Usually when I write characters, they tend to end up rather 'Mary-Sueish', but I'm happy with the way she is turning out at the moment! Rather random, but still loveable :P

I did try to keep some of Olivers craziness, as that was always rather entertaining in the books! Who doesn't love that guy at matches that screams at everyone?

Thank you again for such a nice review :D


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