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Review:Courtney Dark says:
No! I can't believe I just read the last chapter you have uploaded! You have no idea how disappointed I feel right now, because your writing is just spectacular and I just can't wait for another update! I strongly suggest you get your writing shoes on so I can find out what happen next as soon as possible!

I loved this chapter. In it, your writing was absolutely flawless-as usual there were no spelling or grammar errors and you had a perfect balance of dialogue, imagery, thoughts and descriptions. I love the rate at which your characters are developing and evolving, I love the plot and this chapter showed off both of these elements very nicely.

I think Fred, George and Angelina's reactions to Brienne's news were perfect. Knowing Fred and George's personality, I think news like that would be hard for them to take, and so you wrote it extremely well, especially under the current circumstances-as in Ron had just been attacked. Add in the fact that Sirius Black is currently on the loose, and you have a pretty scary situation. I'm sure that Brienne's friends wouldn't quite know how to act.

I love how you set up the scene it the paragraph that began with: 'When the day broke, with it brought tentative sunshine breaking through thin clouds' and the conversation between the five friends was nicely written. Your characterization of Lee is very interesting and compliments what we know of him from the books. He seems like a pretty carefree guy and obviously doesn't take much seriously which clearly clashes a little with Brienne's character-after all, they have had conflict in the past. And I love how you continue to make the twins so canon-how they talk about their desire to open a joke/sweet shop and to drop out of school before the NEWTS. It all feels so real.

The snowball scene was very enjoyable to read, and Brienne's conversation with George was very sweet. I love the fact that they are rapidly growing closer and that she is opening up more and more to him. I just wish she would do the same for her other friends-after all, they are there for her. But anyway, I am excited to see where her relationship with George will go next. I also liked the touches of humour you added into the snow scene.

I liked the addition of the letter in this scene, because it kept the investigation and the mystery that surrounds Brienne's mothers death fresh in our minds. I can't wait to find out who some of the suspects are...and what, if anything, they'll contribute to the story. And I thought the last few lines of this chapter were perfect-they made me even more eager for the next one to come!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hey! You know, it will feel strange not being able to look forward to your reviews, cause there are no more chapters left! xD

I'm really glad you liked it. They relationships are obviously very important and the events in this chapter just highlight them, I think, especially Brienne and George.

Thank you very much for your help over the last couple of weeks xD And I'll definetely re-request when the next chapter is up!


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