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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
When you're yelling at the screen that if they even think of hurting Hugo, I'll hurt them, then wanting to hug him and tell him he's not a failure for protecting his family, that's when you know that you're officially hooked and have been for a while, just been too focused in knowing what happens next to really see it. :D

I'm so glad Susan is going to be okay. She's quickly become one of my favorite characters. And Neville has just become even more awesome than I thought, and I already thought he was pretty darn (darn? :P) awesome.

Loved the action scene. And Charlene, she made me laugh when she was talking to Harry and distracting Ministrial Security.

Amazing chapter!


Author's Response: I'm working my way through all of these, slowly but surely!

Ha! I've read a lot of reactions in reviews of this story, but I think you may be the first to admit to yelling at your screen. I don't think of Hugo as a failure, either. The job he was handed by his father and uncle was one that nothing in his life ever could have prepared him for. Fiona's reaction is very telling; she doesn't believe that what he's telling her could possibly be true.

Susan will survive, but her injuries are quite severe. Still, she's able to contribute something to the conversation. She is honestly my favorite character in this story, outside of the trio. And Neville is very awesome, although he's still awful at flying.

You might recall Charlene from way back in Chapter 5, when Harry takes Artie and Dennis to meet Frank and Alice Longbottom. I really enjoyed being able to pluck her off of the proverbial dust-heap of single-purpose characters and give her a second dose of the spot-light.

Glad you liked it. And I will get caught up soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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