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Review:adluvshp says:
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I really liked this! I think you have portrayed Cedric really well, and yes I agree that even though he was a very nice guy, he must have had his insecurities. You expressed his thoughts quite vividly throughout and it made for a gripping read. The ending was written powerfully as well. I liked the whole concept of Cedric not "liking" the green, and ultimately being killed by a green light, it was quite sad.

All in all, your plot concept was interesting, and I enjoyed your characterisation of Cedric. The whole narrative flowed well, and it was all written quite realistically. I especially liked how Cedric forced himself to keep going, how determined he was - or I should say hardworking just like a Hufflepuff should be. The last two words that ran through his mind while dying were "Hufflepuff" and "proud" and that was great.

A brilliant piece of writing. I'll give you a 9/10!


Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for a lovely review!

I'm really glad you agree about Ced's insecurities. I know a lot of people think he was easy going and a nice guy so they don't think this of him but I wanted to give it a bit of a different slant.

Thank you so much for all the lovely comments! I'm so happy you feel the concept worked and the flow etc was good! It all means so much!

I wanted to give some recognition to Hufflepuff! I don't think they get enough bless 'em!

Thanks again!

Lauren :)

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