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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello! Tagging you from the Gryffie review thread.

Ooh, what an interesting start to your story! I really enjoyed it and it definietly has me wanting to read more.

I love the plot you've built up in this. Starting with the ending scene was really dramatic and when I read it I was like 'Okay, what just happened now?' I was really drawn in. It kinda almost makes me not want to read it though - I'm scared of getting too attached to your Teddy if you know what I mean! If I pretend that the curse misses or something though I might be okay!

I really like how you filled in the scene we know from canon with James interrupting Teddy/Vic. My only bit of CC for this section was that I would have loved to have read a tiny bit more. You seemed to jump from James interrupting to her being on the train and just this bit seemed a tiny bit rushed. I don't think it needs much, but it would flow that bit better if you did.

The next scenes were great, we find out a lot of info and meet a lot of new people but not once did I find it confusing or not understand what was going on - I thought you did it really well! I was really shocked to find that Teddy is a werewolf! That was a really great twist. Also the fact that Teddy/Vic haven't spoken in however many years was really interesting too.

Then we have all the mystery of the murders and we know Teddy is caught and hunted down for something. You've really got me hooked!

A really great chapter though, I really enjoyed it!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :) One day I'll go back and edit the scene with James II, because I agree that it's a bit rushed.

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