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Review:MissMdsty says:
Caoty linked to this in the Face-Off thread and here I am. Should we stop meeting like this? Neah!

First off, I don't like second-person narrative but since you've yet to dissapoint me, I figured I'd give it a shot. I liked that I didn't feel like you were talking to me, the reader, but rather she was talking to herself, giving herself the encouragement she needed to move forward.

Fleur is such a strong role-model. She is one of the most memorable figures in the books since she showed us girls everywhere that beauty, brains and courage don't have to cancel each other out. We can be all those things and be the best we can be without having to put labels on ourselves.

I could really feel Fleur's love for Bill and for her entire extended family in this, more so when she decided that her mourning should wait until they've all left the castle.

The scene with Greyback is something I can see her doing. It doesn't strike me in any way as something we wouldn't see in cannon. I picked up on the "sugar" inspiration and I was very proud of myself for that!

Great job of writting Fleur (and in second person!) so well that now I kinda want to read Bill/Fleur. Also, you're really good with the French accents. I speak French but any time I try my characters sound like they have severe gaps in their vocabulary.

Author's Response: This is a GOOD MEETING WAY! heheh. It would be even better if we were on your AP with the newest ScoRose chapter ;)

I'm so happy you feel that way about Fleur. That's what I think, too. She isn't this brainless airhead -- she is a strong woman who can fight her way through difficulties and use her looks when she needs to.

You picked up on the Sugar?! Yay! I love that story of Shelby's, and really thought that sort of... mood... fit in with here.

I'm so happy you liked this. And! For french accents, I seriously just read every section Fleur ever spoke in the books, and sometimes I listen to them online :P. And now I'm going to be after you when I want Belle to use a French word. Mwahaha.

I think Bill and Fleur are a really under appreciated pairing. That woman stepped into a family that was one of Voldemort's most wanted. She left her home in France to take part in the middle of the war, and never turned away. I think she's such an awesome character, and I'm so happy that you liked my portrayal of her ♥

I'm heading over to your other wonderful review now *insert wub face with hearts*

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