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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
See, now I'm confused again. I don't know what to make of Arabela. Could be a lie, could not be. This is why I don't assume. :P

But Percy would make a good Minister, as long as they don't assume he'd turn his back or cut and run. That might knock him back. That would be sad.

I do really enjoy reading the tiny bits of romance between Harry and Esme. I stand by what I said about not being sure if I could accept him being with another, but I also enjoy resding more of his life besides fighting and mourning. Like thinking that maybe he could move on, though never forget. I think you've got his hesitation, his worries about his attraction for another woman, perfectly. Readers will never forget how much he loved, and will always love, Ginny.

Great chapter!

Sam.

Author's Response: Arabela is a complicated one, that's for certain. I'll share this one bit of fact with you: she's not lying about her parents.

Percy would make a good Minister, for more or less the exact reasons she lists. I think he's well beyond turning his back on his family at this point in his life.

I'm really glad that Esme is growing on you. I didn't really want readers to like her right away. I hope that people *do* feel a lot of doubt about seeing her and Harry together. This shouldn't be easy.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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