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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
I'm not so sure how I feel about this Esme woman. Then again, Harry... What where you thinking? I kinda agreed with Ron when he wanted to hurt him. :P

This was such an exciting chapter, with the men having to fight their way in and getting a little bit closer to the woman, if it is the same one as the woman Esme talked about. I've learnt not to think about things much when I read this, make assumptions - so many twists and turns and surprises. I like that. :D

And now they're, like, on the run. Again. It's so awesome, the action and what's to come in this story, not necessarily the running again. Harry and Hermione talking about it not being like the war because they'll be ready this time must have brought back more memories.

Amazing chapter!

Sam.

Author's Response: Hello, again!

So I'm rather pleased that you feel ambiguous about Esme. She's definitely not the type of character that you warm up to right away. She and Harry have a very complicated history, strongly affected by some of the things that Harry was dealing with in his life around the time they met. Perhaps I'll write that story someday.

This chapter was definitely long on action. I've always loved the idea of Harry being sort of paranoid because of the things he survived as a teenager. So I enjoyed dreaming up all of the booby traps he sets up in his house. My imagination really gets to run wild where his paranoia is concerned over the next few chapters.

So, yes, once again the trio is on the run. And they are much better prepared, although Hermione isn't really any happier about it.

Much to come. Hope you enjoy it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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