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Review:adluvshp says:
Oh My Merlin, Finally!! I was totally cheering (in my mind) while reading the ending scene!! Yay for Helga/Salazar romance =)

I think this chapter was the best so far, it was written so really well. I loved Salazar and Helga's interactions in both the segments. I absolutely loved the paragraphs from "He took a deep breath and then reached swiftly..." until the end of that segment, I think it was a very powerful and significant moment in Helga and Salazar's life, and you portrayed it wonderfully.

The second segment had my heart aching for poor Salazar - oh to endure so much at such a young age. It really broke my heart to read what happened to his parents, but yeah it totally justifies his hatred towards Muggles. And he even killed the guy, ghosh the man is so broken =( I do hope Helga is able to "save" him. *sigh*

I loved the palpable emotion and romance between them later in the segment though, I think you did complete justice to them. I loved their exchange of dialogues during that whole scene, and was pleased by the way it ended. It was all very surreal in a way and I could see it happening in front of my eyes. I especially loved the ending sentence, I totally went "aww" at that.

I loved Helgazar all in all, and look forward to lots more of it in the future ;)

10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

P.S. Please do update soon!

Author's Response: AD. I am so ashamed at how long it's taken me to respond to this review. Life has just been sweeping me away, and I'm so sorry! But I was SO excited for you to get to this chapter. It has the Helgazar I've been waiting to write for so long, and I was dying to hear what you'd think!

This chapter is a huge turning point for the story, and I wanted it to be powerful and high-drama. I'm so glad you felt that! And yes, Salazar has had a very rough time of it, and those events have affected him all his life. He's deeply troubled and conflicted, but Helga will definitely do all she can for him.

Ahh, I'm so happy you thought I did these characters justice! I wanted their developing romance to be believable every step of the way, and I wondered if this was too soon for such a step. But I'm so glad you liked the ending, and just the whole chapter itself. That's so exciting!

Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews! They have meant so much to me :) I'll definitely let you know when I update again. I'm working on it, promise!

--Maggie


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