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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello Iím back again I would have carried on reading and reviewing yesterday, but it got to midnight so I thought it was best if I stopped ;)

Iím really liking Arthurís POV, as it just seems so realistic and so like him, and itís really adorable to read his thoughts. The way he likes Molly and he still canít recover from a kiss, I guess itís like how Molly fan girled Thad, and heís fan boying (if thatís a word?), Molly, and itís just so sweet. I think the nicest thing is, is that he thinks he wonít get his happy ending, yet we all know that he well.

Then that little scene when they got to know each other a bit. Though I did feel it was a bit rushed that Arthur was already asking her out on a date, I did find it very sweet, especially him shouting about that fact in the middle of the corridor!

Arthur seems so enthusiastic about Muggle Studies it really is sweet, as thatís such a major part of his character and Iím glad that you placed emphasis on it. I hope we get to know their respective friends a bit more, as they do seem to be an interesting bunch!

Another awesome chapter, and Iím off to read the next!

Author's Response: Welcome back! I'm glad you're still reading. But get some sleep too!

Arthur's POV chapters became my favorites to write during this story and the sequel. I just really love him. He's a great guy. He is fangirling a bit over Molly haha. Aww bless. He's so sweet.

It was rushed, the first seven chapters or so were intended to be a short story originally, so I whipped through things rather quickly. But then I decided to keep going and so it's a bit rough early on. I really should rewrite it one day.

Arthur and his Muggles. He does love his Muggle things. Their circle of friends will definitely feature a lot in this story! Thank you very much for the review!


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