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Review:adluvshp says:
Hello!!

Ah, I seem to liking this story more and more as it progresses (if that is possible).

I really liked the opening scene between Elaine, Rowena, and Helga. I love to read (and write) budding friendships between characters, so it was a great read and made me smile. It makes me feel sad to see Rowena wanting a life like Elaine's too though, and I wonder if you'll explore how she came to giving birth to her daughter, and all, in your story.

The discussion between the four founders and Elaine had be on edge as I kept wondering if Helga would speak her truth now, but (thankfully) she didn't yet. I liked how she spoke up regarding her views on the "sorting" matter. You have made her this "mother hen" soft person, but also a strong character, which is awesome!

Salazar's views on blood scare me though, and I wonder what has caused his hatred for muggles so much, so I hope you delve into that aspect soon!

I loved the parting scene between Salazar and Helga, quite sweet. Poor Helga though, she is totally smitten and it seems it will just be getting harder for her to tell the truth now.

Anyway, I am totally looking forward to the next chapter, and hoping for some awesome romance between Helga/Salazar soon! Great going!

Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi again AD! I'm finally back to finish responding to all your awesome reviews! They mean so much to me :)

The opening scene of this chapter is one of my favorite ones in the whole story so far. I loved writing the girl talk, and I loved exploring the experience medieval-era women might have had at Hogwarts. These three are so fun to write together! And as for Rowena, Down Comes the Night isn't really her story, but I hope to write more about her in other pieces.

Helga is willing to speak her mind when she feels strongly about something, but she definitely doesn't look foward to it. That's why the discussion was such an ordeal for her. But I'm glad you saw the strength she has; that makes me so happy!

Yep, Helga's completely into him now! Haha I'm really excited that you're ready for more romance at this point, because it's coming! Speaking of which, I'm off to respond to your review on the next chapter. Thank you again!

--Maggie


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