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Review:adluvshp says:
Hi again!

"And he was quite handsome, in his way. I supposed that must play some part in it." - I loved this line. Doesn't handsomeness always play a part? ;) Haha.

I loved the initial few paragraphs where you explained how Salazar and Helga's relationship had evolved. It was important filler information, but I was pleased to see that you didnt make it sound boring at all, as sometimes happens with authors when writing filler stuff.

I love the interactions between the four founders, and enjoyed their meeting in the library.

And oh dear, Salazar's reaction to Godric's news was so sad. It has really made me scared of what will happen when he learns of Helga's secret, it might destroy their growing relationship =(

I loved the scene between Helga and Salazar though, you wrote it beautifully. You have a knack of writing their "chemistry" in a realistic way which is great!

I also really liked the scene between Rowena and Helga. It is great that you are exploring the relationships of other characters too. I like their bonding =)

All in all, this was another well-written chapter. Great work as always!

10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi AD! I'm sorry I'm being so slow to get to all your reviews; I've been sick this weel :/ But looking through all your wonderful reviews is great medicine!

Haha, that line. I could just see Helga thinking something like that, and it's so true :) I'm glad you liked those first few paragraphs. At first I was really worried they would drag or be too filler-ish, but I think they turned out okay. I wanted to show how Helga and Salazar have learned to tolerate and even appreciate each other (at least a little bit), while still keeping things moving along.

I think this is the first scene I wrote with all four of the founders together. I really want to do another one, because I think I've barely scratched the surface of what their dynamic would be like. I've found that it's hard for me to handle more than two characters at a time; someone always gets pushed to the background. But I'm working on it!

Salazar's got some issues to work out, that much is pretty certain at this point. And it's hard for him because he really does value Godric's friendship, but he has trouble getting past the hate. I'm glad you're still liking the dynamic between him and Helga, though :)

Every time I write Rowena, I find myself wanting to explore her character more and more. It's great to hear that you're liking her too!

Thanks again! I promise I'll keep working on these, and hopefully I'll get to your last two reviews soon :)

--Maggie


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