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Review:AlexFan says:
You switched verb tenses at one point and there were very few grammatical errors but I enjoyed the chapter otherwise.

Rose seems very stubborn and headstrong. I didn't really understand why she was mad at Scorpius for not doing anything wrong and helping a drunk person home.

She does seem to have the Weasley pride in her and I didn't expect Ron to immediately get along with Scorpius. You said that he held a grudge against the Malfoy's so I assumed that he'd be at least a little bit hard on Scorpius.

Anyway, good chapter!

Author's Response: Hi thanks for taking your time to review! Yeah this grammar issues keep on appearing, I found a cool grammar checking site though which should help;) I think the reason why Rose was mad, is more the moment of anger, and like I said in the summary, when Rose does lose her logical side of her, she doesn't always merge well with reality. I also think if anyone sees their boyfriend with another woman even if they're helping them, they still probably would be angry!

Yeah I guess with Ron it's more that usually they portray him to be angry and hating Scorpius which is a bit unrealistic. I wanted to show that Rose thought he would hate him, but in fact even she can be wrong at times!


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