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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello Iím back again!

I felt rather sorry for Arthur again at the beginning of the chapter, I think it was mainly due to his little remark about how he usually gets his embarrassment without a potion needed, as I hate to think someone is deliberately horrible to him, as heís such a delightful character, and your characterisation of him is wonderful and so true to his character.

I loved that Arthur had loved Molly since 4th year as it was just lovely, and it reminded me greatly of James and Lily, and how James had to watch from the side lines just like Arthurís having to do, and you canít help but pity them, as you know that they would be a great couple, itís the other half is naÔve about that.

I didnít mention it in the last chapter, so Iíll say it here, I love McGonagall in this story, as you can tell she cares for her students and that she feels for them, and your portrayal of her is excellent, so I hope she features more!

I loved all the Harry Potter eqsue names as they just so much more to the story, and itís always fun to go and look up the meaning of them, and see if it identifies with the character or not!

Then that kiss at the end I was not expecting that, even if it was only on the cheek! Nice surprising me, as I felt so happy for Arthur!

Another awesome chapter in my opinion! I canít wait to read the next!

Author's Response: Poor Arthur. He's such a nice guy. And he just loves her even when she didn't really notice him. Molly's a bit, let's say "focused" hehe... So he was outside of her scope before now. But now they're getting together, and the fluff begins.

I was glad to write McGonagall a few times in this story and its spin-offs, because I really like her a lot and hadn't written her before. She's an interesting character, especially now that we know all that backstory from the Pottermore site.

I tried to keep the names Potter-ish. I'm glad you like them! Some of the meanings are specific to the characters and some aren't as much.

Just a quick kiss for Arthur, but it means a lot to him! Thank you very much for the review!


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