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Review:FallenAmaranth says:

This is fabulous! I absolutely cannot wait to see where you go with this. I'm a HUGE James and Al fan, I love them both, but in different ways ;) But I'm so interested in this, I have not yet read a story in which the MC has one Potter but wants the other :P

So, Hazel Wood. I was actually quite excited when I saw her name - I live in Derbyshire(no where near Derby though) but I've actually been through Hazelwood, and I laughed a little at her name, thinking it was just coincidence. :D :D She sounds stunning to me, why is she worrying about a nose? That's generally what I worry about in boyfriends...don't know why, really. Oh well. So long as she's not another clumsy OC who can't get guys because she's too awkward and hipster. I LIKE HER. And I want her hair.

Anyway, I'm going to read the next chapter in a bit, because my dad just walked in and asked if I'd like a cauldron of pasta. Hmm. To be fair, I do eat about as much as Hazel Wood ;)

Fabby job!


P.S...Your chapter title, that isn't in reference to Jay-Z's song is it? I'm not really a fan of that kind of music, but even I know that song :P

Author's Response: Hi, Em! Your review made me so happy (even though it's taken me WAY too long to answer since I stopped writing for a while)! It's so nice to hear that you like where I've been going with this - I've been thinking about this story for months now and am determined to finish it, so I hope you keep enjoying it. I really didn't want Hazel to be too clumsy or hipster, just possibly somewhat unaware of the effect she can have on the male species - I'm glad you like her.

P.S. Yes, the first chapter title is inspired by Jay-Z :)

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