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Review:adluvshp says:
Hello again! (Happy valentines review-a-thon)!

Ah things keep getting more and more interesting. I wonder why Salazar is afraid of fire though, I cant wait to see that mystery unfold. His reaction was so strong to it, it broke my heart. I loved how you wrote it all.

I love how you write Rowena, she seems exactly like I'd imagine her to be, so kudos for that! I liked the interaction between her and Helga, and it was great to see some depth in their friendship.

Elaine and Helga's argument was also well-shaped, and I loved how Helga (sort of) defended Salazar. It was really sweet and showed a great deal of her feelings.

I loved the ending, and I enjoyed the Salazar/Helga interaction before that. Their relationship seems to be growing, and I love it.

All in all, another great chapter. I love the direction in which the story is going!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey again! I'm running out of ways to say thank you for all your awesome reviews :)

This is one of my favorite chapters in the story for a lot of the reasons you described. I loved writing Rowena, and starting to develop a real friendship between her and Helga. I've already decided that when I finish this story, I'm writing a sequel from her point of view :) And Elaine is another favorite character of mine; she has some more time in the spotlight later on.

Helga is definitely intrigued by Salazar at this point, and she just tends to have a lot of sympathy for people. Both of those factors play a part in her "defense" of Salazar to Elaine. I can't wait for you to see their relationship develop in later chapters!

Thanks again AD! :)


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