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Review:teh tarik says:
Hello! I'm so glad you've updated, and so quickly as well :D

Wow, this chapter really has so much in it - there's princess practice with Aunt Rowena, and that uncomfortable conversation between Addie and Dezzy, and the girls' father returning home (he's such a cold man!), and then the ending where the girls decide to go dancing yet again in the mysterious silver forest. This chapter is really so well-written! Everything just flows so beautifully and as always, you portray the girls' lives and (sometimes dreary) daily routines so convincingly.

Now, as all of you should already know, a princess is given the very important task of finding a husband.

Gah! Rowena is such an incredibly stuffy aunt! But all her beliefs and attitudes fit wonderfully with the time period your story is set in. I think you've got a really good grasp of the social conventions of the era and other things like that - and this came through very well in Addie and Dezzy's little chat. The whole thing about how girls shouldn't be alone with boys and all.

And oh my gosh the ending! That was just so wonderful and mysterious and unsettling - you left us with this image of Salazar waiting there. It's really an amazing image to end this chapter with!

Alright, this has been a really lovely chapter. There's so much in it and yet everything is just perfectly paced. I think your story is really coming on beautifully and I can't wait to read on :D

Cheers!

-teh

Author's Response: Hello teh!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, because it definitely was packed with stuff!!! I wanted to get a lot done with this chapter, so I can start to move the story along some more, because I have plans for future chapters that I can't wait to get to!
Rowena really is uptight and stiff and really proper. I'm glad you think she fits with the era because that's what I was going for! And Addie was trying to warn Dezzy not to go wild by being alone with a boy for too long (gasp, it's so horrible! :P)
And I'm really pleased with how you felt about the ending! I worked really hard to get that right, so I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for all of you great reviews for this story!
Cassie :)

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