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Review:ChaosWednesday says:
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Millie provides for an engaging narrative voice, I like her. This made me smile: "James Potter and Lily Evans were in a steady relationship - a steady love/hate relationship. He loved, she hated, just like the sun rose in the east and set in the west." The POV skips were nicely placed, although I generally find such a switch to be a lot of mental work, but I'm a lazy reader :P I liked how Sirius' POV was placed in such a way that it seemed like the entire thing was Millie's daydream ;)

Author's Response: Hello! I'm glad I made you smile! I wrote the start of this story such a long time ago, when I was I was still working out how to write stuff (who am I kidding? I'm still trying to figure that out), so you don't know how happy I am to hear that you like the POV changes! I've had mixed reviews concerning them!

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