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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello again! I'm here for your prize review!

I'm not too sure if you saw my last review but I'll repeat what I said before. I'm aware that I won't be able to give you 10 reviews all at once so whenever you post something new, I'll review it and then you'll slowly get all 10 prize reviews. :)

Okay so now onto the review!

This was amazing! The way you write, it's so clear and it gets straight to the point! You don't have unnecessary rambling - a lot of fics tend to do that - and you just portray all the emotion really well!

You have a real talent, you really do! I love how you've referenced the fact that Remus was poor and would probably just buy a pack of 20 pens for $2 (AU) (I tried converting it to British pounds but I got confused D:) because that just gives that extra more canon-feel.

I loved, loved the last bit of the third last sentence:

he understands the tranquillity of a necessary rebellion.

That was beautiful, it was so sophisticated and captured the image of the Wizarding War (hopefully that's what it's referencing - I may be wrong :p).

Anyway, this was a wonderful one-shot - it definitely deserved that Dobby nomination!

10/10! :D

Review 2/10. (That isn't the rating by the way, just how many reviews I've left in case I lose track :p).

Author's Response: Hey~

Well, you can't really have unnecessary rambling in a 500 word fic, can you. :P

It was really self-indulgent though - I'm probably one of the few people in this world who'd choose to focus on the bloody pens they use, for God's sake - surprisingly.

Anyway, you're right about that sentence, and once again thank you so much for your lovely review! :D

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