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Review:patronus_charm says:
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I've actually read all of us, but I only reviewed up to chapter 3, so I decided to come back and review this chapter, as this story is great :D

I love Millie's passion it's just so funny to read, I mean what she did to Rex, and threatening to cut his balls off! I really enjoy reading her spark, as it's often hard to find that in OC's but you've written it very welll here:)

And her naivity about her muggle boyfriend, she really does have commitiment issues, but as I've read on, I know why and it was a great reason and perfectly fitting, and it made complete sense!

Poor Sarah and her love for Remus, she reminds me of a besotted fan girl, who loves that person so much yet he never realises, you can't help but feel sorry for her.

Hahaha Sirius I never would have thought he would be the one to become upset if someone broke up with him, but that was really funny to read! And his love for Millie!

A great chapter! Kiana :)

Author's Response: :D I feel unexplainably happy that you came back to review!

Millie can be quite fun to write sometimes, although as far as humour goes, I prefer writing Sirius - his humour feels a lot more natural to me.

And she's got commitment issues that rival even Sirius', which is quite funny in itself, but thank goodness it makes sense! I don't really explain it until later on in the story, so I was worried it might lose some of its flow.

Sarah is actually adorable, and I wish I could write her more, because she is actually such an awesome character! Actually, I might give her a companion story or something, after I finish this one! Thanks for the idea!

And I really wanted to have Sirius upset over a girl, for once. You rarely get that in fics, but I figured that it didn't make sense that he was completely unaffected all the time - he is human after all, and we know he's capable of quite intense emotions!


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