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Review:Remus says:
Heya! Perelandra here from the forums with your review! :)

Ugh, this story and my poor feelings!

I absolutely enjoyed reading this. The change of POV was genius and I loved how you wove their narratives together to make it whole. My favorite line has got to be:

she has accepted the portion of my heart I am able to give her and made no claim on the rest

That made me go 'awww' very loudly. I'm actually glad that I'm on my own right now other wise I would get strange looks.

The personalities you give Salazar and Helga are fantastic. She seems like a woman who doesn't care what people think of her for she is happy. She doesn't care of people think of her as the best looking woman in the world or the ugliest. She just lives her life and is happy. And Salazar...he's definitely more well rounded with actual feelings! He's not evil and I'm glad that I didn't get to see that overly done Slytherin characteristic. Really liked how despite being in love with each other, they still love their respective husband and wife and they're loyal to them. Now I'm left to wonder of what happened between Salazar and Helga that they didn't end up together.

I really wish I could make this review longer but I just don't have anything to say!

Fantastic job! :D Thanks for letting me read this!

Until next time

--Rosie

Author's Response: Hi Rosie! Thank you so much for coming by!

Haha I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that it gave you Helgazar feels. That's what I was aiming for :) And the narrative was my biggest worry when posting this; I like the way their thoughts flow into one another, but I wasn't sure how it would sit with readers. It's wonderful to hear that you liked it!

I'm glad to see that you connected not only with Helga and Salazar's love story, but also with their spouses. This is the 3rd story I've written for this ship, and I sort of have their whole lives planned out already :P So I wanted to show what it would be like for them to have happiness with another person, and yet still have regrets for what might have been.

Thank you so much Rosie! This review made my day!

--Maggie


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