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Review:adluvshp says:
Hello! Once again, Happy valentines review-a-thon, and also, good luck for the ship-off!

I must say I am enjoying this story a lot! I love the way you portray Helga, its awesome! I really liked that we got to see so much of Salazar in this chapter, and immensely enjoyed the interactions between him and Helga. You did a great job writing it all! I suspect that the "creature" is a boggart, and I am very curious to see how Helga and Salazar now deal with the situation. Ooh, and I also liked the little hint you provided of Rowena working on the tiara (as I think that is what she is working on).

I am loving this story so far, especially since your grammar, pace, flow, and characterisation seems to be so perfect, and I cant wait to read further. This is going in a great direction!

10/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi again AD! Thanks again for all your lovely reviews :)

Ahh, I'm so glad you're liking it so far! Helga is such fun to write and I just love her, but Salazar has been much more challenging, especially near the beginning of the story. Glad you're liking him! You're so right about the creature (which I can tell you because I know you've already read on), and it will play a part in future chapters for sure. And as for what Rowena's working on, you've got a really, REALLY good guess ;)

Can I say thank you again? Haha, you're going to get a lot of thanks from me :) I so appreciate all the time you've put into reviewing this story, and I am so happy you're enjoying it.

--Maggie


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