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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Aah! No fair! I can't read any more stories like this or else I'm going to become dehydrated!

This. Is. So. Heartbreakingly. Beautiful.

I just want to curl up in a ball and cry! Because you have just described the Marauders exactly how I invision them in my mind! And thats no fair! Because right now, this piece is just breaking my heart!

Peter was the one that really got me, because lets face it, we're all guilty of writing him off as a snake in the grass, someone who went behind his friends back and who deserved everything he got. But to be honest, he was just such a lost and confused human being that I almost feel sorry for him in a way, because when he chose to sell his soul to Voldemort, the Peter Pettigrew who was a Marauder and who played pranks was gone, and in his place was a person that no one really knew!

Still on the verge of tears over her, so I'm going to have to go now!

Thanks you for such a mind-blowingly beauiful piece!

Author's Response: Hahaha I don't want to dehydrate you! I promise!

That's exactly how I felt when I wrote this. I just wanted to curl up and cry. I was working on the next chapter for Before They Fall, and just thinking about how well things were starting to go for them. But we all know what happens. And part of me wanted to deleted the entire 17 chapters right then, because what's the point in pretending like I don't know that, in four years from where the current story is, two of them will be dead, one will be in prison, and one will be nothing but a shell of his former self. Anyway, I wanted to get all those sad feels out so I could stop being mad at Before They Fall, haha. So out came this!

I'm so happy you liked Peter's part. He made terrible, terrible decision and he was too weak and afraid to make it right. But the Peter that there used to be, he was just one of them. He had everything, and he threw it away. And it's just all so sad :(

See, now you've made me all tearsy over here thinking about this group! We're even!! haha :P

I'm so happy you liked this. It's one of my pieces that is a bit closer to my heart than the rest, so hearing you enjoyed it means so much to me ♥

Jami


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