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Review:patronus_charm says:

Yay you have another Narcissa/Lucius one-shot up, you really do write this couple very well, and each time you do a new one-shot you explore a different perspective of their relationship which is great, as you never seem to run out of imagination for this pairing, so it's always interesting to read the new twist to their relationship.

I liked how you portrayed Narcissa as not entirely perfect, and that she let down her shield sometimes as a teenager, as I don't believe she was always this rather cold woman we see in the books!

I thought the idea of basing the story on the 7 most significant parts of their relationship was great! I've never seen that done before, but it works really well for one-shot as it enables you to have their story, but with not too much detail:)

I noticed a tiny error here - sonand - I think you forget to put a space in here:)

I loved how affectionate Lucius and Narcissa were to baby Draco as that was just lovely to read, and it showed that they genuinely cared for him.

Another great one-shot! Kiana :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing =)

I am pleased to hear that you think that I write Lucius/Narcissa well. They are both my favourite characters so I enjoy exploring different aspects of their lives/relationships.

I am glad that you liked my portrayal of Narcissa - I always strive to craft my characters well.

Its great to know that you liked the seven moments idea, I wasn't too sure about it, but I am glad you liked it!

Oh thanks for pointing that out, I'll edit it =)

I wanted to show the parenting side of Lucius too, along with Narcissa, so I am pleased that you liked that.

Thanks once again!

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