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Review:my_voice_rising says:
An update!!

The description of the locker room was particularly funny--especially the bit about the walls always being wet! Why is it that so many public spaces like that are ALWAYS full of condensation?! haha.

I just love your Oliver Wood. He's trying to be optimistic but knows that he's got a load of goofballs for his team members.

Pippa is my favourite, I think ;D The bit with her mouth guard (where she found it and why she needs it) was hilarious. Actually, I've been laughing at little bits throughout the entire chapter, like Oliver wrestling a pair of binoculars from a stranger's hands, and Thugs United. The scene change when Pippa said "It's still not as bad as that time with the Wanderers" really got me too!

Wait, is that Seamus? IS THAT SEAMUS. I think I'm going to have a heart-attack if it is; you know how much I love him (like a bro.)

Hahaha, "It was Firewhiskey! ...Mostly." Oh my gosh. This is too funny. I absolutely love the Finnegan family here, the mother especially.

And the ending. The ending! So funny! This is going on my favorites right now, I absolutely love this story.

Author's Response: Hi there! :D

I know right? Its like the people who design public venues don't get the concept of ventilation! So I added that in for good measure!

I think Pippa is secretly my favourite as well! I haven't quite figured her out yet, but I like her so far! Optimistic with anger management issues!

That is Seamus. I COULDN'T RESIST! You know how much I love him!

Ah Pippa, when will you ever learn! This scene is actually leading into one that reveals more about Olivers personal life, and why he even took the job in the first place!

Thank you so much for all the support! I was afraid I wouldn't do a Quidditch fic justice (as I am just about the unsportiest person you will ever meet!)

Thank you again for reading and reviewing! This has made my day! :D

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