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Review:Jchrissy says:
He there! The Black sisters are a relationship that always interested me, so I'm really happy to have found this!

This is a short beginning, but you get so much characterizations in this small bit. Andromeda isn't the young woman that will on day sever ties with her family for love, but it's easy to see that she has enough bravery to do so. Though currently she's just a young girl who believes her sister's words are nothing but sincerity.

Bellatrix. Always the leader. She fits the role of older sister here perfectly, and it isn't hard to imagine the path she'll eventually take. She knows no fear, and isn't concerned about mundane things like the possibility of her very young sister hurting herself. When she gives orders the other sisters listen, and it makes you wonder just how obsessed she must've been with Voldemort to bend so easily to his will.

And our littlest princess. I thinks four year old Narcissa would be adorable, haha. I like that you've made her deficient, because at that she they all are. She doesn't understand the real world yet, and she tried to enforce her mother's rule about the tree. I really loved that. And thought it was just as fitting that her older sister would be able to talk her into doing what she wanted.

This is a really awesome first installment, I'm excited to see where you take these characters!!

& hearts; Jami

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