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Review:800 words of heaven says:

So, I reviewed the first chapter of this story, also under the guise of the review tag. I really should go review another story of yours, but I like this one too much!

You have such a wonderful author's voice! And your use of commas - to die for! Excuse the weirdness of me complimenting your commas, but I really love them!

So... Scorpius seems to have potential to be interesting. I already love Rose. And Lily reminds me a lot of Tianna's best friend from Princess and the Frog, for some reason. But we didn't really get much about Scorp in this chapter - I hope to see him in the next three published chapters!

Also, on a slightly unrelated note, um... exactly how old is Kreacher now? He was practically as old as Christianity when Sirius had him, he must be as old as the Pyramids by now! It seems the free elf lifestyle is suiting him!

Anyways, I actually cannot wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you for coming back to review another chapter! ^_^ It means a lot that you've done so, and to hear you say that you like this story so much!

You're like the first person who compliment me on my commas! I love commas and clauses - it's a lot of fun to put them together in complicated ways to give a sentence perfect rhythm. Thank you! *dances*

Scorpius will come back... often. ;) There's still much I have to do to develop his character, as he is complex, but he doesn't let anything show. In some ways, he is like Darcy, but I want to make him more of my own character too, and I still have to figure out the best way to do that.

Kreacher is probably ancient. XD I don't know how long house elves live, and I've never actually thought about it before. My excuse for this story is that the timeline is shortened - Rose was born at the end of the revolution (she's 18 in this story, which would put her DOB at 1799). So instead of the 25 years between the fall of Voldemort and Rose being 18 in canon, there's only 18 years. Perhaps the difference of 7 years would keep Kreacher alive.

That's a very lame excuse, isn't it? :P

But thank you again for your lovely review! I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story too!

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