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Review:Jchrissy says:
It's been way too long. Gah. Big hugs and even bigger sorries.

You should be proud of both this chapter and song! I was really excited when you started us off with a bit of drama, and I think you placed everyone's emotions perfectly. The trio era would be so impossible for me to write, but you do such a beautiful job with them.

I like that Hermione sticks up for Draco and the fact that he does have a right to be there. I can't imagine how hard his life was after all the terrible decisions he had to become part of, and even if she doesn't like him yet, the fact that she still understands him as a human just is so . her.

And here you go messing with a perfectly good Hermione and Draco heads cliche!

Only kidding. But I was surprised, I'll admit. I'm excited to see how these two handle working together.

I think this chapter was perfect in terms of starting us out still. We're back at school, we understand where the group stands, we know that Draco has grown up a bit even if the boys don't want to see it... and all that has been done in a way that you incorporated it into the story and didn't make it feel like you were throwing information at us.

I'll be seeing you very soon, m'dear ♥

Oops! I wanted to mention how much I loved Hermione's perceptive nature in this. We never get to see that from her PoV, obviously, and you just did such an awesome job with it. She's forever the watcher, understanding and taking things in. Her character is absolutely awesome so far ♥

Author's Response: Hello, dear!

I was endlessly excited to see that I had a review and I'm so, so happy that it's from you! I'm really glad that you liked this chapter. This story starts off rather slowly because I was desperate not to rush into a relationship between Hermione and Draco, so if you have as much patience as the other people who follow this story, I'll be so happy. :] I'm really glad you like Hermione's character. She's my favorite and I love writing for her. And I'm SO happy you like Draco. It's my goal to make the world love him. I can't wait to see what you think of the other chapters. Thank you so much for all of your compliments and for taking the time to read and review! :D

--Emily


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