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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling! I'm trying to take this Valentine's review-a-thon as a chance to read authors I have yet to! So here i am!

I have to say that your summary grabbed me immediately. The writing in it was crisp and very easy to sink into, in only that small bit. Of course you could have had help, I've had that happen before where I am impressed with the summary and not so much with the story. But! I was pleasantly surprised that your writing on the inside was every bit as delicious as that first bit.

THANK YOU. You wrote this first one from a child's perspective, and you it sound like a child told it. You didn't use weird spelling or thing like that, you altered the sentence instructor to fit a young boy. You altered the emotions to fit a young boy. Not an adult. A lot of people (that I've read, at least) can't do that convincingly and I was just so impressed with your ability to bring me into young Bill's head that I'm already really excited to continue this.

The idea is a bit morbid, but in a dry humor kind of what. If that makes sense. When a child hears something it isn't nonsense, it's real.

And then he acts like such a sweet man when he decides not to tell his mother. He should have of course, but he's a Weasley and they protect what's there. He's protecting his mother.

I'm absolutely going to follow this, thank you for sharing ♥

Jami

Author's Response: Thank you dear!

Yay! I've captured the mind of a little boy! Mwahahaha! *ahem*

No seriously, it was really nice of you to take the time to review and I'm glad you liked this first part. :)


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