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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi m’dear!!

Happy Valentine's day! Well, in ten days ;).

I really liked to watch the analysis of the family through young Narcissa eyes. Especially the comment about Sirius being with his new friend. Hehe. And then the small bit of heartbreak you give us when she thinks how Andromeda isn’t part of the family, not to her sister and parent’s eyes at least. That is one connection I always wanted to explore more on, and love with it isn’t ignored. I can’t imagine Narcissa never missing her sister, and her you show a more naive part of her. A girl that really does miss her, and it’s.. it was a really awesome thing to sort of start building her character on in this.

The idea of Lucius having to wake her after falling asleep at one of these events is really, really sweet, actually. I think you painted the picture of him walking in, a sort of fun but conceited look on his face, and Narcissa looking all adorable startled, even more adorable with how embarrassed she probably was.

His explanations about the two types of crazy! So perfect and lightened the mood up just enough before continuing.

I think you really have the idea of the pureblood society down. It was easy to imagine Lucius's mother pushing an appropriate young lady onto him, despite his feelings toward her. And again easy to see that, if he were to find someone he truly cared for of adequate... breeding, that that would be acceptable as well. I always feel like I'm reading stories about princess and princes when I read about these two. With all the rules that comes along with who you can court and who you can marry... I love the genuine affection you have in this.

This was a really cute one shot, m’dear. I love looking into the more innocent times of Lucius and Narcissa’s relationships. Thanks for sharing this sweet little story &hearts’

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