Hi Gabbie! This chapter. Ah SO MANY FEELINGS.
This chapter was fabulous! I loved it! I'm so excited that Percy and Audrey are finally together, and I really love them as a couple, because you write them so perfectly, so the fact that they want to get to know one another makes me really happy!
This chapter reminded me how much I love the way you've written Audrey's character. A lot of people make her very stuffy and uptight, because that's how Percy is portrayed in the HP books, but I love the fact that your version of Audrey is so wild and crazy and fun! She brings out a lighter, much less serious side of Percy that is nice to see!
Also, I though that he and Audrey were so cute together in this chapter! The way that they really want to get to know each other, and care about one another's feelings is really sweet! Also, I love how awkward they can be sometimes. It makes this feel so real, because they don't have a perfect relationship.
They end of the chapter was brilliant! It was probably my favorite part, actually. I loved how Percy stood up for Audrey, and wanted to protect her. And THE VERY END OF THE CHAPTER. OH MY GOSH.
Percy appeared as straight-laced as usual in his clothes but there was something feral and wolfish and.dangerous about him
That gave me chills! I could picture it so clearly, and I loved your description of Percy! But I'm nervous that he's going to get into trouble for attacking Joseph Wring!
This chapter was amazing and I can't wait for your next update! What story is next? I'll keep you posted on my updates over on the forums! 10/10
Author's Response: Hello!
Its always such a pleasure getting your lovely reviews. :3
Was this the chapter that really set up Percy and Audrey as a couple? I think so and I think not on some things, but that might just be me trying to hold back on it a little more. But as I read through it, I think the two of them being "just friends" isn't ever going to happen. There's just too many feelings between them and so much need that it can't be denied, though neither of them will openly admit to being a couple, you all know what happened. Hehehe.
Yep, I think Audrey and Percy getting closer was a really important factor for this chapter and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :D
You know, I'm not sure why Audrey would have to be stiff and boring just because Percy is portrayed that way. Usually, people go for the opposite of what/how they are, at least to me and she really adds more depth and interest to Percy. She's funny and wild and crazy and she wants to pinch his bum. :D
Don't we all? :3
I think there's going to be alot of awkwardness between them for a while but their banter and relationship is really sweet sometimes! :D
Bwhahah, you didn't like Audrey running around trying to squeeze Percy's tight little bum, Cassie?! Gasp! HAHAHA. Anyway, I actually like the last scene and the first half of this chapter the most myself.
So many feels! >_<
Percy's secrets are about to start coming out and well, let's just hope Joseph Wring's face is in decent condition by the end, yes? :p
Uhm, I think I'm going to update for that George story, "Memories" next. It needs some love. And then maybe Albus again, it depends on my weird moods. :D
But anyway, thanks for the review! And I'll be looking at TFD soon!