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Review:nott theodore says:
I'm so glad that James is back playing again! But the international rules have really messed everything up for the Falcons, haven't they? I feel sorry for Sinead having to try and sort all of that out, but it's nice that she trusted James to help her sort it out. It's good that James finally got to play with Roxie again. It must be a nice present for Al to see his brother and cousin winning on his birthday!
Freddie really does have awful timing! I can't believe he thought that right after the match would be a good time to tell her all his problems. I don't really blame Brigid for getting angry at him, though I think she'll probably forgive him eventually if he explains it properly, but I think it could take her a while to get her head around it. Ryan is a cool brother though!
I really enjoyed this chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response: The rules have done their best to mess things up for the Falcons, but they're all determined not to be bested by them! James has a very tactical mind when it comes to Quidditch, something that he doesn't really recognise in himself all the time - but Sinead sees that strength, and she's going to use it all she can. So she trusts him to make the calls. And yeah, nice to be able to pop James and Roxanne in the same team again. :)

Freddie's timing is utterly TERRIBLE. Boy lacks tact. Brigid has every right to be angry with him - and actually, every right to NOT forgive him, given what he's done, which is a lot more than just distancing himself from her, remember. And yes, Ryan is a cool brother indeed. :) Next chapter should be up soon, it's just being edited. Thanks for reviewing!

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