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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Hey, there, I'm here with your requested review, you attacked my thread so quickly, I didn't know how to react! Hahha. So, I really enjoyed this chapter and think Thalia is such a great lead for this story. She's got so much strength and despite her relationship with her mother, she hasn't become cold or hard or bitter. The relationships with her friends are sweet and realistic and I loved that she got bullied into having that makeover. And her date with George went nicer than I thought! :D Until Sirius was being all rude! Thalia showed a bit of surprise at seeing him with another girl and I wonder if she was a little jealous? Hoping? :3
Sirius needs to buck up and reveal his feelings for her soon or George will win! Hahah. I liked the little bit at the dinner too, with the bats! Hahah, that's such a James/Sirius thing to do! :D
But goodness, that ending! What?! Mary! D':
It was so sudden and horrible that I had to read it over again to get a grip on it. How awful!
I hope the person who did this to her gets what they deserve!!! >:(
Anyway, all in all this was a great mix of funny and angst and who doesn't love and need more of that?! Thanks for the read and thanks for your review on A Force of Wills. Not sure if you want to read it still or not but Abandon will be up tomorrow hopefully. Check that out if you so desire!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hi!

I just saw their were spots free and ran for it! Yeah I wanted to show that despite how Thalia's mother treated she didn't follow the same path as her. I guess that was done to create more similarities between her and Sirius, and how they both show great mental strength in that respect.

Haha yeah where would you be with friends who didn't want to give you a makeover, after all they are so much fun to do! And I'm glad that you liked her and George's date.

I can't really say who will win, yet as that would ruin the story but in a couple of chapters time, things will get interesting ;)

Yeah you'll know who does if, if you think back to the Prince's Tale, as it mentions it there, and I thought it would be cool to include, as it would make the story more canon.

Yeah I would have reviewed more chapters, it's just with school and the long chapters lengths, I only have time for one at the moment, but I saw your request and I'll do it soon :)

Kiana!

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