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Review:AlexFan says:
RAVENCLAW REVIEW!

Anyway, I really liked this for a first try for Next Generation. There were some very minor grammar errors that unless you were looking for them you wouldn't notice and it didn't at all interrupt the flow of the writing.

Usually, when authors switch between the past and the present, it gets a little bit awkward and hard to read and it just doesn't flow well but you pulled it off really well.

Rose also seems very believable so great job on that and yeah, I thought this was really well done!

Author's Response: Woo for the Ravenclaw review ta!

I'm glad that you liked my first attempt, as I wasn't too sure about it myself. I will look over those errors.eventually, it's just so tedious!

I'm glad that the flashbacks worked as I have seen some truly awful ones before, so I really didn't want mine to be like that!

Thanks for the great review!


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