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Review:adluvshp says:
Happy Valentines Day review-a-thon!

Oh! I loved this! I am surprised that I didn't come across this before. I now know why this was nominated in the ultimate ship-off!

I think you have written this brilliantly, Helga is just amazing! I love your portrayal of her. She's very much the Hufflepuff we've heard of, yet she is so much more inside, and it's great that you've explored it. I enjoyed reading your backstories of Godric and Helga, of them being of muggle parentage, and the way they grew up together practising their own magic and such. It all was thought out very well. I also liked the way you described Salazar, he seemed exactly like I'd imagine him to be. The last interaction between him and Helga was amusing and I enjoyed reading it a lot, and the ending left me with a smile.

I think this is a brilliant story, and so I am adding it to my favourites to make way through all the chapters, and keep following this amazing piece of writing.

Your grammar, pace, flow, and descriptions (and over all narrative I should say) is impeccable and its refreshing to read such a neat and perfect piece of writing. Your characterisations seem to be great and I cant wait to see more of Helga and Salazar. I would love to see more into Godric and Rowena too though, especially since they all seem to be such good friends.

Great going!

10/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi AD! Wow, your reviews have my mind! I'm so happy you made the time to stop by and do this for me :)

Ahh I'm so glad you like Helga! I love hearing that people enjoy her; I wanted to give her some life, and also give her a chance to stand out. It seems like the other Founders get the most attention (much like their houses), and I wanted Helga to get some time in the spotlight :) I loved exploring her background, and starting to explore her relationship with Godric and with Salazar.

I will focus on Helga and Salazar the most, as you might imagine, but in the next few chapters I try to give readers a chance to get to know each of the other characters. I hope you enjoy that, and I'm so, SO happy you've read on!

Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews! I'm off to start responding to the rest of them now, and I can't wait!

--Maggie


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